I really like the new layout you came up with, but I would flip a few things.

I flipped the DW to the other side because I like to be able to stand on either side of the DW to unload stuff. Standing on the sink side you can unload to the cabinets on the left or behind to the cabs on the stove side. Then if you stand the right side, it will be easier to unload dishes, glasses, etc, to the upper open shelf.

I flipped the range and fridge side because you don’t want the dw across from the range. On that side, I feel like the cook is nice and protected from anyone walking behind them to ”fridge shop”. It also hides the cooking mess a little better from the dining table. I also like how food from the fridge can be a pivot, step and then plopped down on the main prep counter straight across. Same for putting away groceries that land on that counter.

I also made the fridge a counter depth so it doesn’t stick out into the isle so much. In a galley kitchen, the CD fridge makes the kitchen look and feel more open and sleek.

I noticed that in you current picture the uppers are not equal distances from the window. That is a pet peeve of mine, so I made the upper on the left and the open shelf unit the same distance. I also like a little breathing room from the window, but I know in a small kitchen you might want as much cabinet/shelf space as possible.