Critique my Hawaii House Plan
Erin L
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Comments (5)That's a LOT of house and will be expensive to build with all those jigs/jogs in the exterior wall. A big house is fine if you can afford it but sometimes "young families" have a somewhat unrealistic idea about what things can cost so I'm just throwing this out as a warning. It would be sad for you to spend a lot of time and get emotionally invested in a plan that is 3 to 4 times the size of the average starter home only to discover that you need to scale way back. I also can't that I'm overly impressed with this design. For one thing, all the jigs/jogs in the exterior wall means that the roof plan will be quite complex which means that it will be more expensive to built AND will be more prone to problems down the road. (Roof valleys are more prone to developing leaks because water is channeled in them, so the more valleys you have, the more likely it is that your roof will develop leaks.) Secondly, even with that two story great room with, I assume, an entire wall of windows, I don't think the house will get very good natural light. One of the finest books on architectural design I've ever read is "A Pattern Language" by Christopher Alexander. In it he says "When they have a choice, people will always gravitate to those rooms which have light on two sides, and leave the rooms which are lit only from one side unused and empty." The reason "light from two sides" works so well is that it decreases harsh shadows. You don't wind up with a room that is overly bright on one end while the other is in deep shadow. In fact, about the best justification for designing a house with a complex exterior is that doing so allows more of the rooms to have windows on two sides. Here tho, while you have all the expense of a complex exterior shape, the designer has not taken advantage of that complex shape to give the major rooms windows on two sides. In fact, he has wasted one whole corner of the house on a closet that doesn't need or have windows! As much as possible, closets should be located on interior portions of the house, not on exterior walls. The master bath is huge...especially that shower... but I would find it dreary because, again, it has no windows. The laundry room is nicely sized so I imagine the intent is that clothes folding and possibly ironing and mending will take place in the laundry room...but I would not want to spend any more time than absolutely necessary in the laundry room because... no windows! If you have hired help that does the laundry/ironing/mending, then you may not care whether the laundry room is particularly pleasant place or not. But, if you or your spouse takes care of these chores, then wouldn't it be nice if the laundry room were a more pleasant place? The kitchen will only get natural light from windows that are at quite a distance from the kitchen work zones so it will likely be rather dark. Also, will it bother you that the kitchen island it totally off-centered in the opening to the great room? Two story great rooms can LOOK very impressive but many people find that they're really uncomfortable places to actually spend time in. For one thing, they can make heating and cooling difficult as warm air from the great room rises to the second story and spreads out in the rooms up there. Some owners of two story great rooms have found that, in the winter time, they have to set their ground floor thermostat to 80 degrees in order to achieve 70 degrees on the ground level. Meantime, anyone who is upstairs is burning up! Additionally, Sound from the two story great room can wake children sleeping in bedrooms on the second floor. Noises from children playing upstairs can bother people attempting to watch TV or talk in the great room. And, if improperly designed, you can get a echo effect in two story great rooms that can make you feel like you're sitting at the bottom of a well. For the most part I think the two-story great room trend is beginning to die out as more people opt for cozy spaces to spend time with family instead of soaring spaces to impress visitors. How old are your children? While you haven't posted the 2nd floor plan, it looks like it could be a pretty long hike for a 5 year old to reach Mommy if she wakes up in the night from a nightmare. If you have a small child, perhaps you're thinking you can use the office next to the master bedroom as a nursery until your little one is old enough to sleep alone way off upstairs. But, I would not want patio doors in a room occupied by a toddler. Many 2 and 3 year olds can open such doors and I wouldn't want to risk my baby wandering outside in the middle of the night. Finally, there is no door shown to the office at the back? Do you plan to access it via the pantry or breakfast area? Not sure I'd want an office that you had to go thru the pantry to reach, but adding another door off the breakfast nook could make that space a bit tight for table and chairs....See MoreNew here. Please critique my house plan sketch, thanks
Comments (11)I'd bring the master bedroom closet in to the middle of the house. This will allow you to have windows on two sides of the bedroom, while also forming a sound barrier between the great room and the bedroom. I also agree that the closet needs to be wider to be useful. Is that the washer/dryer in a closet in the master suite? I'd hate that. With no place to keep laundry baskets or to fold clothes, you're constantly going to have piles of dirty stuff right in the master bedroom doorway. I like the idea of having it NEAR the master, but not in that space. Also consider how you're going to vent the dryer. I can't see the master bathroom well, but it seems to be very spread out ... for no real purpose. For example, you have two sinks crammed together in a small vanity, which means no drawer storage ... and then acres of empty space leading to a windowless toilet closet. With this much space, everything should be comfortable -- what you have now is just lots of floor space. I'd look at eliminating the square-footage-gobbling hallway. The kitchen is over-sized. When people say they want a large kitchen, they usually really mean they want a highly functional kitchen that'll make cooking easy. Lots of counterspace doesn't = highly functional. Consider how many extra steps you'll have to take in this kitchen to prepare a meal. Consider, too, that you're planning a monster-sized pantry, which is the best and cheapest way to store your stuff -- you don't need that PLUS all those expensive countertops. I'm assuming Bedroom #2 is for your son, whom you describe as medically fragile? Is that bathroom adequate? I'd consider taking in some of the butler's pantry to allow more space for his special needs. Note that this bathroom has no storage space -- I'd want at least a linen tower. The jack-and-jill bath also has no storage space. Also, you'll want to flip the door in the bathtub/toilet room so it doesn't prevent someone from entering the tub. This room is very minimal. In the other hall bath, with the toilet on one side and the sink on the other, how can anyone enter the shower? Since all the bedrooms are already served by a bathroom, do you really need this shower? As a powder room, this'd be comfortable -- as a full bath, it's too crowded. Overall, I think the secondary bathrooms are really quite lacking. All of them need storage, space for a clothes hamper and a trash can. I'd give up the flex space and enlarge the bathrooms. Note that in the girls' bedrooms, with closets on one side and window seats on the other side, the girls can only place their beds in one spot. Finally, I don't like a garage-shoved-out-in-front of any house, but an oversized garage will really overshadow even this fairly large house. Honestly, I think you can do a whole lot better than this house plan....See MoreMy new house plans and elevations Please Critique!
Comments (26)Here is the East elevation. He uses a third party to make us a 3d rendering, which we have not seen yet for this plan. The main roof being so high is my concern as well. I think the reason for this is that the depth is 36' on this roof, and with a 10/12 pitch, it just gets that high. There is a window missing from the back leanto, which is my pantry. Interesting your comment about windows being too small. On the drawing it may seem that way, but is that really the case? I guess huge walls of windows don't seem to fit the old farmhouse look I'm trying to achieve. Also, I really wanted all the second floor ceilings to be 5' kneewalls, which would have brought the roof line lower. According to my architect, this was not possible, so the portion of the roof with dormers is a 6' kneewall, and the rest is a regular 8' ceiling. This is my drawing that I originally sent him, showing it with a kneewall. I'm also going to try and make the plans larger so the dimensions are easier to read....See MoreGive advice/critiques on my home plan please
Comments (132)I find there is an enormous people spending time on this board showing everyone why they need an architect and do not know what an architect does. In response to what I believe you meant, let me comment on the current discussion and answer this question. First, I am not sure I need to know what an architect does to know what an architect does for me. However, that is not really the point of this, so I will ignore that portion. There was a study done on architects quite some time ago, that informed my thoughts then, if this has changed please let me know. I am going to get some of this wrong but believe I can relay the basic ideas. The study selected three groups of people (1) office workers, (2) upper class college students in a selective institution, (3) and architects. They then presented all three groups with design problems. The people in the office had interaction needs and environmental preferences, while the physical space had environmental conditions. All three groups were then asked to create the best office in three different physical spaces. The environmental results were then scored on a 3 point scale: met requirement, partially met requirement, or didn't meet requirements. The interaction scores were then very slightly modified by those environment scores. This was all known to the participants and individually these interaction modifications were fairly small, I don't remember the exact numbers, but the cumulative effect could be significant. The architects performed significantly better than either other group. I don't remember the exact explanation proposed for this, but I do believe the idea was that architects tend to focus on some type of synergy between physical space and needs, while other groups tend to focus on one or the other. ---------------- So, what I believe architects do in a nutshell: Take my requirements and make all the things I need a little bit better by creating an environment in which those things can happen a bit more pleasurably or with a little less effort. Having said that, I believe that architects suffer from Baumol's cost disease and the value hurdle is becoming increasingly difficult for architects to meet. I personally find the value proposition for using an architect diminish as constraints increase. At this point, if I am developing something for sale, the quality of the design takes a back seat to the quality of the finish carpenter....See MoreBruce in Northern Virginia
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