Critique our second draft floorplan.
Fred M
8 years ago
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Comments (10)I'm having trouble reading the details on the plan, so I can't comment on everything, but here are my thoughts on what I can see: - The first thing that jumps out at me is that I hate the kitchen island. It's like the island is escaping from the kitchen! You have an important walkway running horizontally through the middle of the house, and the island is interrupting it. This will be a constant irritation. I'd make the kitchen into an L and turn the island the other direction. You can still have island seating. This'll echo the direction of the walkway and enhance it rather than being a problem. - I'd add an extra foot to the width of the pantry. You have storage on only one side of the long, narrow pantry, which means you have essentially the storage of a reach-in . . . but you're using the square footage of a walk-in. One extra foot would literally double the storage space in your pantry. I'd also consider adding a pass-through door to the kitchen. - I vote absolutely NO sunken anything. It's an accident waiting to happen. - You say you're looking for square footage to cut. I would cut off the sitting room behind the master bedroom and some of the master bedroom closet. You have an office and another room I can't identify right there by the master, so I think you have a spot for one adult to sit and do something while the other is sleeping -- this is space that you will never miss. And the closet, even with TV/accessories, is larger than some NY City studio apartments! The other thing I'd cut is the kids' playroom upstairs. They each have their own generous-sized rooms, and they have space a-plenty to hang out and play. - Having addressed your concerns about cutting square footage, I've gotta say that I'd consider adding some space to your great room. You have a large kitchen and dining area . . . and beside them, this great room looks like a pretty good room. - I lived in a house once that had a jack-and-jill closet, and it worked well. In our case, it was a walk-through closet with hanging space on each side. One room was a child's bedroom, while the other bedroom was a guest room. This arrangement allowed the child to have an extra-sized closet . . . yet if the guest room had ever become "someone's", a closet would've been available. And, of course, we kids loved to use it as a pass-through. - I'd consider losing your son's bathrooms' exterior door. The only people who would be upstairs would be the kids' friends, and they'd walk through the bedroom of their friend to reach the bathroom. It's not that large a bathroom, and two doors take up too much space. This post was edited by MrsPete on Sat, May 17, 14 at 7:40...See MoreCritique on Floorplan
Comments (15)dadereni said: "Yes, it's more distance but if you want to stay in the house for the rest of your lives, the exercise will be good for you! I'm glad you're not building the house for the next owner." I agree exercise is a wonderful thing. And going up and down stairs carrying laundry IS exercise. However, if they are planning on aging in that house, they have to think more long sighted. My mother was a fanatic about exercising and staying fit. She went to the gym 4-5x a week. When I was 30 and she was 54, she and my dad decided to move out of their beloved 2 story colonial into a ranch home. My mother loved colonials, not ranches. So I asked her why she was moving. Her answer was, "We are not getting younger and I want to make sure I am in a home I can age with. Having all the same floors on one level will help if anything ever happens." It never occurred to me that anything could happen to my mother who was in such good shape. My dad, who never exercised, yes but not my beloved mom. Well when Mom was 72 she was diagnosed with Parkinson's disease, a disease I wouldn't wish on anyone. She continued to go to the gym 4-5x a week until she got an infection on her heel that wouldn't go away. Then she was required to stay off her feet until the infection healed. Once she got the infection, her body started to go downhill because of the lack of exercise and the Parkinson's. She was never really able to exercise the same again. Thankfully because of her foresight in picking a home with the laundry, and everything else on one floor, she was able to stay in her home until almost the end. My DH and I are building a two story because of site constraints. However, we are putting the master bedroom on the main floor with the W/D nearby our master closets. On the second floor will be the guest room, bath and my studio. I intend to use the stairs, hopefully for the rest of my life, but if for some reason I cannot, I am glad we are putting in an elevator so I can continue to go to my studio. My point to this longwinded commentary is if you are thinking of aging in place, then you have to plan for it now....See MoreFeedback/ Critique our plan please , 1st draft. SOOO EXCITED!!!
Comments (51)To me architecture is as much an art as it is a science. However, some prefer one type of art over another...just like in genre of music. I for one can't stand rap music. I detest it. My dislike does not make it 'wrong'. Yet, I will not spend any of my money on anything related to rap. Many love rap music and it makes plenty of money. So...apply this to architecture. Do many architects prefer a certain 'type' of construction and disprove of 'fat' layouts or big roofs? This is obviously not my profession, but I do love learning about other professions and other perspectives. I understand your analogy, but the thing is, you're not talking about musical preferences here -- you're talking about misplaced notes, or a tempo that doesn't work with the melody, or instruments that don't blend well together. Even when you're talking about forms of art, rules still exist. You got it right in your title: This is a first draft. It can be polished and improved significantly, but -- for that to happen -- you have to be willing to listen to advice. And you're getting good advice here. I have actually thought about an L shaped house, but I think for us the flow of this works better. Let's test that theory and see if the house has good flow. The red lines represent the path you'd take from the various parts of the house to the laundry room. Note that EVERY ONE OF THEM funnels through the kitchen, one of the busiest rooms in your house. So while you're cooking, people'll be squishing through carrying large baskets of clothes to and fro. This is the exact opposite of good flow. On the other hand, let's consider getting groceries into the house, into storage and to the table -- this works! You bring groceries in, there's the pantry, there's the refrigerator ... when it's time to cook, you bring them into the kitchen ... then straight on to the table. I'd think about the sink location, but everything else is set up to run like a well-oiled machine. So the question is, how can you make ALL (or at least most) of your daily chores run easily like the food storage ... instead of horribly like the laundry lay out? Consider all the other things you do on a daily basis that could either run poorly ... or be designed well: Bringing in the mail, taking out the trash, taking care of the dog, managing the kids' homework, storage of sports equipment, wrapping a present, sitting down to read a book. Think through all these things, and then work on laying out the house so that everything you need is logically organized....See MoreDraft Home Plan - Please Critique
Comments (45)We are likely going to add built-ins to the wall to the interior (down in picture) side of the fireplace wall. We're also thinking of bumping the fireplace outside the house, TBD. Where will the bed go? Does anyone on here actually have windows in their bathrooms? Everyone comments about that but almost none of the houses we've walked have windows with bathrooms. My master bath and my guest bath both have windows. Only my powder room won't have a window. The bed could be positioned on the other wall, but how is that different? It's not. My comment is trying to show you that there has to be a better way to lay out the bedroom and bathroom. Including the fact you put the bathroom and closet on the exterior walls so the bathroom could have windows on two walls and the bedroom only has windows on one wall. We're thinking about what to do there You use someone of design talent to create a well designed space to begin with so you don't need to then figure out what to do there. That's closing the barn door after the horse has left. Where is the wasted space? The wasted space is that from the edge of the bed to the wall you have 13' which is the length of a full room. And your width is almost as wide. Unless you spend inordinate amounts of time in the bedroom other than sleeping, it's wasted space. If it's not being used on a regular basis, it's wasted space. It's an open foyer looking down on the first floor and door. So you're saying you have an open foyer that leads to nowhere that looks downstairs? WHY? No one is going to walk into an empty useless space to look down. Again wasted, useless space. A designer could create the idea of an open space that works with the house but this is not it. Good catch. According to the step calculators online, you're correct. We measured several houses we walked (7.5x11.5" steps) and based off that. But that doesn't net out. will re-measure... We had larger stairs in the plan until we measured real stairs and cut these down. And another reason if you don't have the years of working as a design professional, you hire someone who can catch things like this. And to design something that looks and works better, but hey, it's your 6 figures. We should be able to flip the plan either direction once we find a lot. And on the size we're looking for, should be plenty of flexibility in the orientation of the house. It's dark because it's an INTERIOR space with NO natural light from windows. It has nothing to do with orientation. Orientation will just make the lack of light slightly better or worse. Off of an alcove. You still have to walk into the living room to get to the powder room When you find a lot, also find a person of design talent unless you're willing to waste six figures of your hard earned money on a less than ideal and my guess less than attractive house...See Morebpath
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