Do you want funny, serious, or what?

If funny, you could do a "where's Waldo" type thing with your name. Or a riddle about what is different about this picture.

If you want serious or seasonal, something like: the boxes are unpacked, the stockings are hung, and now that you know where to visit, it's beginning to feel like home.

I actually like the one you posted.

Honestly, I am not sure I would make a point of mentioning it. A simple

"Happy Holidays from our Home to Yours!âÂÂ
(which connects to the drawing on the front of the card).

Then on the inside left, your new address as of OO/OO/OOOO.

I guess in my mind, the people who will care that you have moved will likely know that anyway. Otherwise, it seems a little odd to make a point of mentioning that you have a new home. If you were doing a housewarming party at the holidays, and this were an invitation to that, perhaps it would be another story.

You have to show us the drawing when it is done. Is the artist going to do some kind of wreath or other holiday item on the card version of the drawing?

Congrats on your new home.

Maybe you could have the artist draw a horse drawn sled full of stuff with "We've moved over the river and through the woods to....your new address.

I think that what you have in mind is perfect. It's not hokey and if it were, it's Christmas and hokey is fine.

I think your message is just wonderful! :)

Jan at Rosemary Cottage

That's a great idea zenfoodist! Friendly & to the point.

I've sent cards to the old address because I failed to notice a change. Good idea to call the recipient's attention to it.