Why is the gym larger than your living room?

Why does the living room not have any natural light?

Why is the garage almost the same size as the rest of the downstairs?

Why do the bedrooms only get a single window each but the gym gets windows on three walls?

Three small observations:

A mudroom BESIDE the family entrance would be largely unused at my house. Traffic has to be funneled THROUGH it.

Is that a barn door at the powder room? I would never use that bathroom, if so. Doesn’t feel secure or private.

I don’t want guests standing at or entering the front door to have a full-on view of my kitchen.

Is the porch window right above the powder room toilet?

The mutton chop cornice returns, vertical siding in the gables and no frieze boards suggests a builder was nostalgic for army life and the attic is filled with trusses.

The house needs some sophistication and it wouldn't be too difficult to provide.

No one likes to be at the edge of a precipice ... that is what it will feel like for the people sitting in your living room. A half vaulted living room is bad design. Either make it bigger to cover the whole living room or smaller to only cover the staircase.

I'm ok with asymmetry, but your front door not being lined up with the master bedroom balcony doors looks like someone measured wrong and not like an intentional design element.

Does the lot slope? Or is the basement pretty devoid of light?

I think house will live a lot smaller than it looks unless that basement is finished and you spend a lot of time down there. The main floor living room will feel like a weird afterthought with how it's set up.

I think you have a lot more work to do here

The door asymmetry on the front really throws me too.

3'-0" aisles in the kitchen are insufficient for new construction. Make them at least 4.

I'd like to know why you'd want an upstairs gym. Anyone working out in the early morning will be waking up the person in the adjacent bedroom, unless the gym is only used for low impact yoga and meditating. You have an entire unfinished basement - that would be the perfect spot for a gym. Ours is in the basement and I can still hear DH dropping weights. If a treadmill were in that room - THUMP THUMP THUMP THUMP.

Living room absolutely feels crammed into a space that would normally just hold token furniture - a sideboard and a couple chairs no one sits in. That space feels like it should be a foyer, not a living room.

Why do you need 2 sets of stairs to the basement?

I think the living room looks more like a lobby, being smaller than the master bedroom, open to the front doorway, having the stairs right there, and so on.

For the mudroom, if you have a pocket door insted of a barn door, or no door at all and not even cased opening, but rather no separation at all, and hinge the garage door on the other side, it will get used.

Perhaps the pantry door should swing both ways, it will be easier to use.

I hope the appearance of rear of the house will receive as much attention as the front.

Draw the shadows as if the elevations face different directions and the sun is shining from one point.

Where you designate the stair circulation is critical in laying out a house. Here it is quite strange, wrapped around the FP and creating a tiny Living Room and 2 story ceiling that doesn't relate to it. Not to mention the stair does not utilize other established circulation space to be efficient in a small floor plan.

Ditto other comments about 2nd floor gym that large on wood framing instead of concrete basement. Barn doors on Powder and Mudroom.

Some door swings shown are not optimal.

Hopefully you only drive a Mini Cooper, as the left side nothing bigger will fit. On the right 21' is pretty short too.