I think it may be a bit wordy, i wouldn't say that its in need of a good editor.. i think thats because Dahlquist is a New York playwrite and director and this is his first novel..
It does have a slow pace but the character development is very good and the novel is very gothic and full of intrigue - it essentially traces the story of Ms Temple who is tracking down her husband who deserted her and he has ended up in a nefarious coven so the tension builds as the novel progresses..
I found the first chapter on a blog, so it would be interesting to know what everyone else thinks...
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